Alright so first of all definitely sounds super dated
The hook sounds like something that would have came out a long time ago too
You know it sounded like it was going for a Bay Area sounding type of record
But it just sounded super dated
And you know I could I can hear the attempt for a certain sound
But it just wasn't hitting it
I would say collab with someone who can write hooks
I mean it's one thing to write a verse
And it's another thing to write a hook
Not everyone can write hooks
I would just suggest get better production better engineering and someone to write the hook
You know you can't do everything on your own
But yeah like I said production engineering
And just man like how dated the hook sound
It was just bad man
